7th Presentation-Kashmir

JAY: Assalamualaikum…, before I proceed with my comment, I would like to wish ‘good luck’ to everyone that has mid-term this week. Study smart k….
Erm, the presentation for last Monday was about Kashmir and the presenter was Miranti. From my understanding, Kashmir is located at the center between Pakistan, India and China. The major official religion in Kashmir is Hindu, Muslim and Buddhist. The Kashmir valley is the important part because it is the most fertile land and the major residents are Muslims. It is one of the reasons that the conflicts emerged in Kashmir and the victims are mostly the Muslims.
For Miranti’s presentation, she delivers the information in confidence and clear. But, she can improve on her eye contact, avoid using language that most people could not understand and do not depend on reading the PowerPoint’s slides. My last word is ‘I like your presentation’s introduction’.

Yaya: salaam everyone! the presentation on monday was about Kashmir and presented by sis Ira. the topic was presented in a clear voice, but i only get and understand the part where the reasons for conflict was but other than that was a blur to me.

sis Ira was clearly nervous but she made up for it with her clear voice. she tends to read the slides too much thus no direct eye contact was established much and she tends to say non-words when not finding the right word to describe. but all those could not break down her determination to share with us the information about her topic and i admire that in her a lot. Keep up the good work!



Eyllia: salam for all...today the presentation is about a country named Kashmir and it is presented by sis MIRANTI or IRA.this country has its own conflict. The Pakistan and India is fighting over Kashmir. Maharaja Hari Singh agreed on the notion that Kashmir should be part of India rather than Pakistan. Ultimately, the Indians gained Kashmir because the most important political movement of that time, the National Conference Movement of the Kashimiri Muslims preferred India to Pakistan. There are several Kashimiri militant groups which are Hizbul Muhajideen, Lashkar-e-Toyeba, Harkut-ul-Muhajideen, Tehreek-e-Jehad and Jammu Kashmir Liberation Front (JKLF).

For Miranti's presentation, well, i can say that there is some effort. congratulations for her! nevertheless, she too depending on her slides. she has no eye-contact with audiences and she seems so nervous. the notes on slides are too long..all in all, she has done a good job!!! :)