5th Presentation-Palestine

JAY: The fifth presentation is on and the presenter is my own group member for our blog, ELLYIA. Now i will straight away with my comments. In my opinion, Palestine is a famous country because of the conflicts or issues that happened there. The major conflict is among Palestinian and Jews that fighting to get the land in Palestine. The land that Jews were fighting for is Jerusalem. They try to get Jerusalem because the Jews do not have their own land. One of the tactics that Jews attack Palestinian is to make the Muslims in Palestinian that are Sunni and Syiah fighting among themselves. This will make Jews interrupt and might have chance to conquer Jerusalem.
For Ellyia presentation, first of all, I want to say well done to her. Initially, she has shown some interesting pictures and explains the introduction in detail. In historical background and conflicts or issues sections, she chooses the important events and explains about every chronological conflict in detail. But, there is something that she can improve on such as focusing on all audiences in class and not to look at the front only. Furthermore, she must be well prepared about the topic and not to rely on the text in her hand, means that not to read the text all the way during the presentation.

Yaya: oh eyllia I am so sorry i didn't come for your presentation because I was sick. I wish you could post your notes on our blog so at least i could read it. hehe...